I like this piece. Pushing that kind of perspective is a challenge. I think the head is a bit too small or the facial features are constructed to make the head too look small.

Have you tried setting up a camera from this angle and taking a picture of a friend or yourself for reference? It really helps a lot. Even looking up some pictures online for reference could help a lot. I usually get a good 6 or 7 pictures of anything before I get to drawing, especially the human body.

I like some of the darker lone in the skin that you have. Add more of that to bring out details of the body.

Another good idea would be to establish a light source so that you can really give this piece some definition.

And watch your line quality. If you play with it a little, using thicker lines that get thinner as a body part is farther away from the camera i.e. the arm, you can really accentuate the angle.

Hope this helps. Plz don't get mad.

ahah im not going to get mad, in fact im really glad you've told me this, i do have a question though, how can i make the lines thinner as the body part gets further away, i have a basic idea of how to do it but, just to make sure? I wish i got more crit like this =3

Anime is not a subsitute for porn just reminding you.

other than that looks goodly

--
"It's S-T-U-M-P, Stump Fucking. get it right when you tell your friends about it in the Playground Tomorrow!"

I completely missed this one >_>

Really well done, although the face is a bit off. Wrong size perhaps. Not sure.

--
Name's Amaya, pleased to meetcha!